Thinking about your writing in a conversation

My latest example of a topic that expresses a position is between my father and I discussing us getting new phones in the spring. Examining the conversation to me it seems that my position was very clear. I said that "if we get new phones in the spring it would allow you and I to do quite a number of things more. For example I run out of space on my phone quite often so it would be a good idea to get a phone with a larger space capacity. Secondly the new IPhone 6S processes information faster than the mac book  pro so it offers a lot more opportunities and accessibility on a mobile device." My point was pretty clear but there wasn't many oppositions from my dad but I feel as though it was clear.